
Okay, I have a Halloween story that involves no pumpkins and no demons and no monsters and nothing but an old man, a cat and Death. It is for sale at the best price of all. Free. I am lucky to have family who are good at art and will hopefully get some covers done for future productions.
Is it great and wonderful? Weeeelll... I don't think it's my best but it's pretty good and hey, it's free. If you don't like it a refund is available.
It might even explain something to Christianity, if they want to hear.
Ouch. My teeth are sharper than they used to be.
Nice story LI! Particularly enjoyed your view of the exact nature of Heaven and Hell... ;-)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed that Leggy
ReplyDeleteLiked it. Reminded me of Pratchett's Death. Praise indeed.
ReplyDeletefree? i can shoe you into a nice little lucrative deal if you slip me something attractively-sized in return...know what i mean, know what i mean?
ReplyDeleteIt's OK, and it's got a little bit of wry charm. I believe I understand why you don't feel it's your best work. If you would like a critique from a former fiction editor and fellow writer, let me know by posting here and I will send my opinions to your gmail.
ReplyDeleteBest,
J
Good to hear it met with your approval ;)
ReplyDeleteJay - all criticism gratefully accepted, and no offence is possible. I learned early that neither scientists nor writers can afford to have an ego.
That's a cunning story, old man. I think I'll buy one of your other ones now.
ReplyDeletethanks for that.... not often you get anything worth a lot more than you paid for it....
ReplyDeletebut why the ugly American construction of " Don't you got" ? ...have never heard it in English English
hi loved the story is there a sequel coming up soon , i would love to see more of this
ReplyDeletep.s it wasnt too scary